A mathematical Poem (contd.)

After three years

A

Beautiful ballerina

Crushed by fate

Dancing in the night

Every hour 1000, her rate

Fingers wrapped around the pole

Gingerly maintaining her poise

Hungry men rejoice

Inebriated with

Joy

8 responses to “A mathematical Poem (contd.)

  1. Wait .. m looking for synonyms for indigenous and ingenious…

    Seriously speaking… You deserve an applause!!

    And well.. tune dikha diya tu hai IIT wala hi stuff… 😛

    Kudos!!

  2. From being a courtesan to a bar dancer (pole dancer)… the downfall of the british empire and the consequences it had on the girls whose business thrived on these lechers.. or is it from Elizabethan age to present scenario?

  3. @kriti
    I don’t think many IITians would like that comment………but srsly, ur reverence for crap is phenomenal…..lol

    @mohua
    well, the poems represent our lives……..from the summits of success to the abyss of oblivion……..Also, by trying to keep most of the lines same, especially the first and last two, I intended to convey that we all start in the same way, we all look the same at the end….but what happens in the middle is what gives us our identity

    • great words man…
      “I intended to convey that we all start in the same way, we all look the same at the end….but what happens in the middle is what gives us our identity”
      totally agree…

  4. ammazzing blog!!!
    jus taking a shortcut n leaving a comment on one applauding each n every post…but for the upcoming majors..wud definitely hav written sumthing thoughtful rather dan simply ‘amazing blog’ 🙂

  5. @nishi
    nthng…actuaaly both the words in that line are long..so in normal font, the length of this line exceeds the third line…..ruining the pyramid effect…..

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